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NaTaLy
Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 43
brooklyn,ny,usa

0 posted 1999-12-20 11:52 PM



standing really still
afraid to move
afraid to breathe
standing there torn and tattered
broken in body
but not in mind
stronger then ever
standing there through the night
everything around is crumbling
but you continue to stand tall
immortalized in the hearts of many
forever there
never moving
standing still
knowing that they look at you with admiration
gives you strengh
gives you hope
and through the darkness a light shines through
and you stand proud
knowing that that light is you.

 n.m.

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starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
1 posted 1999-12-20 11:55 PM


"Knowing that the light is you" I think this line sums it all up, i liked this poem...i can tell you put much thought into this!

Starboards

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

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