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Mario21 Junior Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 11 |
True Love By: Mario21 A beautiful smile without even seeing your face A loving touch without having your embrace A tender kiss without feeling your lips Slow dancing in our hearts because my hands have never touched your hips A faraway love yet so close It’s funny how this love is better than most A love searched for throughout a thousand lifetimes That now seems only seconds as the clock unwinds. A moment so surreal it is believed to be a dream But for the first time looking into your eyes it is everything it seems Two hearts joined together walking through the gates of heaven Complete we are together symbolized by the number 7 Two souls intertwined forever destined to be connected A love like this so perfect so real it could never be objected Two people put together deemed perfect by the creator above Whom we used as an example towards each other to show love A love put together clear as day and night A love that’s a happy shade of gray not just black or white Meaning so much that we are each other’s guardian angel When we look at each other our eyes get tangled We sing a song to which only we know the lyrics In our hearts is the only place you can hear it A romance unconcieveable for some to think of We really do have a true love. |
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destiny502 Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 57OH |
 oh WOW!! this is an amazing poem! i am at a loss for words really..your a great writer..if only i could write like this i think my life would be a little better  i cant wait to see more poems from you!!! |
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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
I think this is a truly great poem. I once thought I felt the way you do. Unfortunatly turns out he wasnt the one for me. But I hope that you have found your love, and the two of you will be happy. Keep up the good work! |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
it's so great to hear of people's love findings...i have found one but he let me go...oh well...i guess everything has a reason... Starboards "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
Your poem was great it really enjoyed reading it . I really liked it because it was romantic... thanks -Elizabeth- |
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Laura Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 26 |
Mario21- This poem was amazing! It especially had a greater effect on me because it was your first post. Why can't all guys be like you? Why can't they express themselves so wonderfully? Whoever this girl is that you're talking about- she's very lucky! *~*Laura*~* "Dream over me with a tear, anything it takes to wish me here. Magic and sweet lulabyes, any lucky penny will do fine to wish me here." -Nikki Hassman "Any Lucky Penny" [This message has been edited by Laura (edited 12-22-1999).] |
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