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Alwye
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In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-12-19 01:21 AM


My soul has long seeked
The glitter of my dreams
Reaching outward
Towards the silver skies
Wanting only
Acceptance.

My heart once yearned
To be understood
A tender hand to hold
A soft embrace
Wishing only for
A friend.

I once felt abandoned
Within this world
Iced over
Closed from life
Needing only
To be lifted up.

In the light of your eyes
My body emmersed
I am now whole
So safe here
Wrapped within the cloak
Of you.

Upon warming wings
I fly
As you carress my face
And whisper tenderly
I know now
You are where I belong.

~Jeff, you are my world, and I love you more than anything~


 *Krista Knutson*

~Only within the depths of the most ominous darkness can the beauty of light truly be understood~


© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
BraTt
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since 1999-10-25
Posts 41
Yakima, WA United States
1 posted 1999-12-19 04:33 PM


That is a very good poem, as I can relate to loving someone as much as you love Jeff.  I love my boyfriend so much, that it often scares me that we might part, but then I think again, and I know that he loves me as much as I love him, and we've stood still through all the obsticles in life, and we've made it through, so there is nothing that could tear us apart.  I wish you luck, and a very Merry Christmas.  
Tina TT
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since 1999-11-01
Posts 45
Victoria, Australia
2 posted 1999-12-19 09:45 PM


Very sweet and sincere....well done  

 ~What if you slept? What if, in your sleep, you dreamed? And in your dream, you went to heaven and there plucked a strange and beautiful flower? And what if, when you awoke, you had that flower in your hand? Aye, what then?~



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