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The Mike Sacks
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since 1999-08-29
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brooklyn ny

0 posted 1999-12-19 12:05 PM


i wrote this poem peace by peace toa girl named inna......read give me ur opinons

there used to be a great power that comes over me.
  but did u know,that wen u  go....it would  be my darkside i'd see
but every time i saw u i'd drop to my knees
i used to see so many futures,wen i stared in ur eyes
and now i feel the lies ,that i put in my mind  are found
but did u know,that wen i go....i'll find where i lied with ur sound, i compare you to the stars in the ski,from the night where i'd lie,on the beach
Before it became to cold to surive,i used to sit night after night stearing at the moon knowing this moon was looking down on u
but did u know that i cant go........on... living knowing the truth,that u dont feel the same towards me.
BABY!!!.........I told u i comepare to a life living old and ur that coat wen its cold..to me.
there used to be this great power inspired by me....but did u know,it never goes...and now my eyes will be a live wen i see u that night with him.



 I wish i were a poet

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The Mike Sacks
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since 1999-08-29
Posts 129
brooklyn ny
1 posted 1999-12-19 03:49 PM


wow that suked
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