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destiny502
Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 57
OH

0 posted 1999-12-17 07:10 PM


I can't begin to describe,
these feelings for you I cannot hide.
We haven't been together for all that long,
but right now, it feels like we can't go wrong.
I love the way I feel with you,
and i hope all that you say is true.
To spend our lives together,
for always, and forever,
is what I always dream of.
That and all your love.
I do my best to remain true,
because I love and cherish all in you.
You're everything I could've asked for.
That and so much more.
These words i say,
could never portray,
all that i'd do
For You.



© Copyright 1999 Heather - All Rights Reserved
starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
1 posted 1999-12-18 12:00 PM


Wow! Genuine love! I like this one! Keep it up!

Starboards  

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"It would take an acrobat, I've already tried all that, I'm gonna let him fly"
-Dixie Chicks
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Captain_rodeo
New Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 3

2 posted 1999-12-19 09:27 PM


Heather-
Why do ya think your poems stink?????  They are great.  Don't ever put yourself down! Or your work!

Captain_rodeo
New Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 3

3 posted 1999-12-19 09:37 PM


HI HEATHER! IS THIS WHAT  I DID?????????? HEHEHEHEHEHHEHEHHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHHEHEHHEHEHHEHHEHEHEHEHE4HEHHEHEHEHHEHEHEHEHHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Mario21
Junior Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 11

4 posted 1999-12-20 01:38 PM


True Love! That is something that most people could not even begin to understand let alone write about. I give you all the props in the world for being able to create something that sends out that ever lasting emotion of love.
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