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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 1999-12-17 04:19 PM


I'm probably gonna read this to George, the guy I like/love

My eyes have closed.
My soul has burned.
Through the lies,
I have endured.
You listen to your friends,
and not your heart.
And this, my friend.
is tearing me apart.
Do you like me?
I need to know.
Do you see,
the love I show?
I handed you,
the key to my heart,
and you rejected it.
That tore me apart.
Through all that sadness,
and anger, too.
The only thing I thought about,
was how much I like you.
Through everything I have endured.
My broken heart, battered, injured.
Something remains through all of that.
My memory, you can have that.

© Copyright 1999 Allysa - All Rights Reserved
starboards
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
1 posted 1999-12-17 06:12 PM


Allysa--
  Wow! he will be a lucky guy to hear that poem! I'm liken this one!! great job!

Starboards

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"You will see a lot of things,
But they will mean nothing to you
If you lose sight of the thing you love."
-from the movie "At First Site"
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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
2 posted 2000-11-08 04:27 PM


thanks. just addin this to my library.

Morning rain fell on my window, and I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-11-15 07:45 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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