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UNLOVED-1
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 16
dominican republic

0 posted 1999-12-15 10:48 AM


   Look into my eyes and tell me what you see.
   It's loneliness and with you i want to be.
   Take this loneliness away from me.
   And all my love i'll give you for free.
   I looked into your eyes and i saw the stars.
   Why does everything beautiful have to be so far?
   Probably you'll never know what i feel.
   Because this secret i'll never reveal.
   But if you look into my eyes you'll find out.
   That i love you my heart wants to shout.
   You might ask who i wrote this to.
   If you read it you're the one, and it's for you.



 otis omar

© Copyright 1999 Otis Omar Aracena Jon - All Rights Reserved
Isabelle
Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176
Indiana
1 posted 1999-12-15 10:21 PM


All i've got to say is this is a very sweet poem. i loved it. Hope to see more from you.

Isa =)

Lynn
Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
2 posted 1999-12-16 01:14 PM



This was so SWEET! I enjoyed it so much. Great job....

 If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~

starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
3 posted 1999-12-17 11:48 AM


Awww! "Why does everything beautiful have to be so far?" I love this line! cute poem!!!

Starboards

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