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Untitled (need suggestions)

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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden


0 posted 12-13-1999 04:24 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Allysa

Kayley, they call,
you can hear them but
they are not there.
Kayley, they call,
their breath,
in the air.
Kayley, they call,
a bad girl
you are.
Kayley, they call,
but the seem
so far.
Kayley, they call,
we know,
what you did.
Kayley, they call,
you're
just a kid.
Kayley, they call,
lurching,
to grab you.
Kayley, they call,
a thousand,
knives stab you.
Kayley, they call,
they
really are there.
Kayley, they call,
but from where?
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Marilyn
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1 posted 12-14-1999 09:48 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

I have 2 suggestions. First the light green is very difficult to read.... . The other is for the title. How about They Call?
Allysa
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2 posted 12-14-1999 04:11 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allysa

well, it wasn't supposed to be green, it was supposed to be black, but I guess we can thank my little sis for that. And They Call sounds like a good name to me.
Allysa
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3 posted 11-08-2000 04:31 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allysa

thanks.

Morning rain fell on my window, and I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


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Enjoyed

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