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Teen Poetry #2

Symphony Of The Sea

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-12-12 01:26 AM

The smokey breath of Poseidon,
Billowing over wintered wings.
Gracefully touched by ice maidens,
Silent thoughts magically sing.

The mother's crystalline wine,
Flows over verdant isles.
Glimmering like an ancient shrine,
A mirror expanding endless miles.

A melody floats upon the tides,
Lingering within cool sprays.
Upon creamy foam the tune rides,
And silver notes gently raise.

Sweetened with an aqua hue,
The mermaid song plays on.
Secrets of the depths are viewed,
Unlocked by the coming dawn.

A symphony soars within the light,
Sea nymph voices floating high.
Within the sound I hear her might,
Echoing where ocean meets sky.

The crystal opera begins to fade,
Becoming now a hymn of the sea.
Memories fall in a final cascade,
Reminding that the song shall always be.

*Krista Knutson*

"I can feel you breathe, it's washing over me, and suddenly I'm melting into you..." ~Faith Hill: Breathe~

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 1999-12-13 11:19 AM

Well done Krista. Beautiful poem.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

2 posted 1999-12-16 09:41 AM

Marvelous! I love your work! Please check into the Publishing Forum and get some addresses from Ruth! I would really like to see you published!

SeaDragon
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since 1999-12-11

Posts 11

3 posted 1999-12-16 11:07 AM

I like the "smokey breath of Poseidon."

starboards
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since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

4 posted 1999-12-17 11:52 AM

Nice work, as always!!!

Starboards

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