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NYsw33tz
Junior Member

since 1999-12-10

Posts 10
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 1999-12-10 10:37 PM

Narcissistic Society

perfect girl
perfect world
so unhappy
hide yourself
plastic smile
you're a mask
scared to break
the mold at last
daddy touches
friends aren't there
do your makeup
fix your hair
mommy's blind
"everything's fine"
if only she knew
you're always lying
save yourself
don't be like them
don't be scared
they don't love you

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-12-10 11:06 PM

Oh, this cuts deep...powerful work, simply said. Welcome to Passions, you will be a wonderful addition to our family! :>

*Krista Knutson*

"I can feel you breathe, it's washing over me, and suddenly I'm melting into you..." ~Faith Hill: Breathe~

Jer
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 443
USA

2 posted 1999-12-10 11:20 PM

Awesome poem! I agree with Alwye. This work is very powerful. Society often tries to cover up and hide what is. I feel that people place a mask over themselves to hide who they really are to fit in the society that lives in the shadow of something it isn’t. Anyway, Great work... hope to read some more in the future. Welcome to our family.

Reguards,

Jer

NYsw33tz
Junior Member

since 1999-12-10

Posts 10
Brooklyn, NY, USA

3 posted 1999-12-10 11:24 PM

I'm glad you feel that way! Thanks a lot and believe me I have books full of poetry. I just never thought people would actually be interested in reading my poetry.

Kris

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

4 posted 1999-12-10 11:28 PM

Sure Interested, I take it you're from NY? what part?

NYsw33tz
Junior Member

since 1999-12-10

Posts 10
Brooklyn, NY, USA

5 posted 1999-12-10 11:46 PM

Brooklyn area. I've lived here nearly my whole life. How about yourself? Familiar with the NY area?

Jer
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 443
USA

6 posted 1999-12-10 11:49 PM

I uesd to live in New Jersey untill about 3 weeks ago when I moved here to Massachusetts.

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

7 posted 1999-12-10 11:52 PM

I live in the Bronx, but I love to hang out in Manhattan. I have a couple of friends that live in Brooklyn, around Brighton Beach. If you ever feel like chatting, email me!

NYsw33tz
Junior Member

since 1999-12-10

Posts 10
Brooklyn, NY, USA

8 posted 1999-12-10 11:55 PM

lol, alright i'll keep that in mind!

Master
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since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

9 posted 1999-12-10 11:58 PM

Is that a no?

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