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Teen Poetry #2
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peanogrl83
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0 posted 1999-12-08 10:33 PM




This one's really bad..sorry guys!  Another passage in a story of mine...

"I felt like I was walking through a dream world - a world full of machines, not people.  People so absorbed with themselves and their goals that they lost the elements that made them human, becoming efficient robots incapable of feelings or compassion.  These people wander through life offering idle "I love yous" as automatic replies backed by no emotion.  They fail to look beyond their immediate being to glimpse true humanity.  I, I am one of the few, the lucky.  I awoke from this dream world before I fell asleep.  I'm awake now.  I am the one who feels in an ocean of unanimated, inanimate robots. I am."


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