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Answer to my Pain
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Answer to my Pain |
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JEBE Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 32WILMINGTON, NC, USA |
MY HEART HURTS SO BAD I CAN'T MAKE IT STOP MAYBE IT NEVR WILL DO YOU BELIEVE IN SOUL MATES I DON'T KNOW IF I DO I THINK I HAD ONE SOMEONE WHO COMPLETED ME BUT NOW HES GONE AND MAYBE THATS WHY I CAN'T UNDERSTAND I HEAR HIM WHISPER IN MY EAR ONLY WHEN I'M ALONE I WANT TO GO TO HIM I KNOW I CANT FIND HIM OR MAYBE I AM SEARCHING TO HARD FOR THE ANSWER TO MY PAIN. I WANT THE WORLD TO LEAVE ME ALONE BUT I WANT TO BE FOUND MAYBE I JUST NEED TO FIND MYSELF OR LOSE MYSELF WHICHEVER ONE COMES FIRST MAYBE THIS IS WHAT GOING CRAZY FEELS LIKE. WHATS THE POINT OF LIVING........ TO BE THE BEST PERSON YOU CAN BE, TO FIND LOVE, ACCOMPLISH THE WORLD THEN WHY DO I GET PUSHED AWAY WHY DID THE WORLD TURN AGAINST ME HOW CAN I DO AND FIND WHAT I WAS PUT ON THIS ERATH TO DO AND FIND MAYBE ITS TO SIT HERE AND CRY AND MAKE OTHER PEOPLE HAPPY BY MAKING MYSELF MISERABLE |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
This is so sad and painful the self pity is more than I can bare and more than you should. Stand up ,shake it off, chin up ,move on. |
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AngelDust Junior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 30Minnesota |
JEBE, first off, look at the purdy dophin that's my icon... See? It has a big smile on it's face! Just like you should! Things will get better. I personaly do believe in Soul Mates, and someday, I think you will find yours. Life does suck sometimes, but, It does get better. If you've lost a loved one, you will bounce back, to love another. That's what life is all about. Getting - Loosing - Getting back. After you have lost something, and you get it back you tend to value feeling much more than you would otherwise. Best of luck to you! -Angel- |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Astraea believes in soul mates. It hurts badly when the world seems to turn its back on you, saying that our purpose here is to love, among other things, and yet won't let us love them. It hurts when that love goes away. But it gets better; it just takes a while. Nicely done poem. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
I like your poem. Although it is sad. I understand your pain and sorow. You have to know that life is full of bad, good, happy and sad times, but it's waht you do to get through them that make you a stronger person. And you have to remember everyone eles is fighthing a harder battle than you, although it may be hard to understand that it's true. Always remember to keep your head up when things go bad, and to always live life to the fullest no matter what, because you never know what tommorrow holds. As far as soulmate, yes I believe in that, and I think in your poem here you have expressed that very well. Keep up the good work! Gina |
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