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Teen Poetry #2

Untitled (Need Some Sugg.)

Jer
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 443
USA

0 posted 1999-12-06 10:56 PM

What have I done to deserve this fate?
This hell on earth that fellow humans
have conveniently built around me.
With every dishonest action,
The flames grew stronger.
They have yet to reach me.
Though I feel them closing in on me.
Frighteningly fast!
I'm scared and am alone,
Or am I scared to be alone?
Was this hell of mine created by my own paranoia?
The fright of being alone
and never finding anyone to be close
to and as a result pushing them away.
If this is in fact a figment of
my imagination...
Then only I can find my way out.

Rachel_A
Member

since 1999-11-30

Posts 70
North Webster, IN USA

1 posted 1999-12-07 10:11 PM

The topic of this poem is really good, and I think one that a lot of us can relate to!!

JEBE
Junior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 32
WILMINGTON, NC, USA

2 posted 1999-12-08 06:07 PM

YOU DON'T NEED SUGGESTIONS...YOUR BRAVE FOR LETTING PEOPLE TRULY SEE INTO YOUR SOUL AND BY WRITING YOUR ALSO GETTING TO KNOW YOURSELF EVEN BETTER...I APPLAUD...POETRY ISN'T ABOUT WHO HAS THE BEST POEM ITS ABOUT FEELINGS YOU WANNA SHARE WITH THE WORLD

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