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Rachel_A
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since 1999-11-30
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North Webster, IN USA

0 posted 1999-12-05 11:15 PM



'why are you always like this?'
'like what?'
'like you're better than everyone else in the world.'
'what do you mean?'
'what do i mean?  well, you can't even let go and be yourself.  you always have to be so stuffy and perfect and you look down on anyone who is laid-back and likes to have fun.'
'i like to have fun.'
'yeah, and that's probably why you say i look ridiculous when i laugh, and give me strange looks when i act goofy.  i think a person looks their best cracking up.'
'well i think it looks stupid.'
'my point exactly.  and you always think everything is so boring.  you can never admit that you had a good time.  if you ever even have good times.'
'i have a good time when i'm with you.'
'but i laugh'
'and even though you look stupid, i still love the sound.'

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Jeri
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 8
Kissimmee, Fl, USA
1 posted 1999-12-15 03:12 PM


Ms. Rachel,
  Sometimes the hardest things are the things taht make you the strongest.  I understand that you were hurt and so was he.  In the end, you are the stronger one.  In my view, this is the best mistake you have ever made.  


 ~Jeri :)

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