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Kevin
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0 posted 1999-12-04 02:10 PM


The show is over
Closing curtain
Satisfaction
isn't certain
long reflections
acts gone by
miss directions
all a lie
Solemn secrets
never told
Dreams that never
did unfold
apologies
remain unsaid
curtain closing
And I now dead.


© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 1999-12-04 02:30 PM


beautiful symbolism


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Kevin
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2 posted 1999-12-05 02:34 PM


Thanks i wasnt sure anyone would really understand it =)
Kevin
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3 posted 1999-12-05 03:45 PM


(closed)

[This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 12-05-1999).]

Marilyn
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4 posted 1999-12-06 01:09 PM


Well done Kevin. I enjoyed this much.
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