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Teen Poetry #2

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Singer1981
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA

0 posted 1999-12-03 11:07 AM

Silence descends upon the crowd
The lights appear to dim
A path clears
He walks towards me, smiling knowingly
Extending his hand
As I reach out, the picture begins to fade
I awake with a start.

~*Queen of the Faes*~
New Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 4

1 posted 1999-12-03 09:30 PM

Don't you hate those kind of dreams? You get so close and yet....oh well. This is exellent! Keep it up!

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....A shimmer of wings....a rustle of amber leaves.....voices singing within the the trickle of the streams....eyes glowing within the midnights....magic floating upon the breeze....Welcome To The Land of The Faes...

Star Fairy 2
Member

since 1999-09-06

Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa

2 posted 1999-12-04 04:24 PM

this was soo good!!
wow
keep posting!!

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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Singer1981
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA

3 posted 1999-12-04 07:37 PM

Thanks star and queen! i really appreciate any comments!

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