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The Mike Sacks
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since 1999-08-29
Posts 129
brooklyn ny

0 posted 1999-12-03 12:26 PM


all i do is think of you
play my guitar and sing to you
lose my ears and eyes for you
choose to live or die for you
but u'll never do the same
theres nothin i can do or say
to make u go my way today
now theres nothin left to say.

Every day i see you 2
goo goo eyes like 8th grade kids
i lost my mind 2 years ago
.........the first time saw u 2



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I wish i were a poet

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starboards
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
1 posted 1999-12-03 10:16 AM


I like this one, mike...dont degrade urself...you are a poet!!

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

The Mike Sacks
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since 1999-08-29
Posts 129
brooklyn ny
2 posted 1999-12-03 12:42 PM


thanx
Beri
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since 1999-11-25
Posts 149

3 posted 1999-12-03 10:04 PM


I love this, and like I said before, you should love all your own work, even if you dont think it is your best, still remember that it is yours, from you....
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