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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny 
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i like u u dont like me its seems like u might but its to hard to see i open my eyes ur never there but wen everi close them i bring u here here next to me in my arms im holding u tight ,and far from harm i look in ur eyes to see them glow with this feeling i get,u'll never know i jus pray for our lips connet 1 night so i can really go on and hold u tight. ------------------ I wish i were a poet |
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Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
God, I know this feeling!!! You seem to be able to put alot into words very easily, great job. It was a bit hard for me to read though at one point because of the errors, but you know, we won't even discuss that, because I have heard enough about that recently and I am sure you have too. Anyways, I enjoyed it. I felt as though I was reading my own thoughts of the past, just expressed in the very simple terms I was always looking for! |
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The Mike Sacks Member
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