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jcthaman
Junior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 22
Hershey, PA, USA

0 posted 1999-12-02 07:51 PM


Althought we've never spoken,
i can't get your voice out of my head,
my confidence hurt, my heart broken,
maybe i'm better off dead.

Hardly a day has ever passed,
that i haven't watched your every move,
you sit diagnol to me in biology class,
you are smart, kind, cute, and funny, too.
oh, did i mention you have a nice @$$?
Well, you do!

But the point is, we are two worlds apart,
you are popular and outgoing, i'm just sweet, shy and smart.
fear of rejection keeps me away and breaks my heart,
but i have realized you could never be interested in me,
this love was just not meant to be.


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Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 1999-12-02 09:05 PM


Please tell me why she would never be interested in you? Popular, druggie, nerd, geek...what ever the cliche's are these days. They are a bunch of huewy!! Be who you are and talk to who you want to. If they try to bully you....let them try. Don't give up who you are for a bunch of losers. People who bully do it because it is the only way to build up their own self-esteem.

Talk to her, what do you have to loose? If she rejects you because you are not popular...then she wasn't worth your time in the first place.

Jeri
New Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 8
Kissimmee, Fl, USA
2 posted 1999-12-02 10:06 PM


i enjoyed this poem. the only thing is that i agree with the other reply. you know something, i agree with it, but i know exactly where you are coming from. but you gotta remember this, you never know unless you try. good luck!
Lynn
Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
3 posted 1999-12-02 11:25 PM


I agree with the above. What have you got to lose? I used to have the biggest crush on this very popular guy, and I didn't think I stood a chance. Well, one of my friends "asked" around, and found out that he had actually had a crush on me for a while. You never know unless you try.

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If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~

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