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Jer
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0 posted 1999-12-02 03:20 PM



I have a dream or is it that,
I haven't any clue;
A girl with golden hair,
Eyes of shining blue.
She promises me she will return,
I hope she'll come back for me;
My dreams will all then be complete,
My fantasy I'll see.
The girl of my dreams will come for me,
I know she'll come tonight;
The moon is round and big and full,
The stars are shining bright.
She and I will get upon a horses back and ride,
Throughout the forests' trees;
We'll stop just for a little while,
With flowers 'round our knees.
I’ll make a chain of daisies for her,
Dandelions too;
And also add some violets,
And lace some roses through.
We'll ride through day,
And ride through night;
And ride till there
Is morning's light.
I'll come home bright and early,
No one shall ever know;
The great treasures that I shared,
With horse 'neath stars aglow.
The girl will come for me,
Despite what it may seem,
I know that she’ll come back for me,
But only in my dreams.

© Copyright 1999 Jeremy Snyder - All Rights Reserved
Angela16
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since 1999-11-19
Posts 37
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1 posted 1999-12-02 07:25 PM


this is a REALLY good poem! It's so sweet.
good work.

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Angela

Angela16
Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 37
USA
2 posted 1999-12-02 07:26 PM


this is a REALLY good poem! It's so sweet.
good work.

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Angela

Angela16
Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 37
USA
3 posted 1999-12-02 07:45 PM


I think this is a really good poem,
it is so sweet!
Keep up the great work.

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Angela

Angela16
Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 37
USA
4 posted 1999-12-02 07:45 PM


I think this is a really good poem,
it is so sweet!
Keep up the great work.

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Angela

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