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Jer
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since 1999-12-02
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USA

0 posted 1999-12-02 03:16 PM




My knees start to shake,
When you’re in sight.
My mind fills with wonder,
My heart in fright.
When will this feeling stop?
When did it start?
How can I listen to my mind
Without breaking my heart?
I’m so confused
What should I do?
I can’t think of anything,
expect of you.
Should I ignore you?
Or just give it time?
I can’t think straight,
My heart controls my mind!!!

© Copyright 1999 Jeremy Snyder - All Rights Reserved
Kevin
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1 posted 1999-12-02 04:22 PM


my fav of your posts welcome to passions
Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
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2 posted 1999-12-02 08:58 PM


Well written....Welcome to Passions again..
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