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Jer
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since 1999-12-02
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0 posted 1999-12-02 03:07 PM



The light breeze
whipping a strand
of her hair...
Clouded sunshine
sprinkled with
warming caresses...
The familiar scent
of newly shaven grass
in the air...
A slight humming somewhere...
Half-closed eyes,
encompassed in calmness...
Drifting slowly,
feeling the sway...
She’s lost in that splendor
moment of time...
Wallowing in
thoughts of you...


[This message has been edited by Jer (edited 12-02-1999).]

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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-12-02 10:38 PM


Oooh, this is beautiful....welcome to Passions, I cannot wait for more.

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*Krista Knutson*

"When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~


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