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Stephani
Junior Member

since 1999-11-26

Posts 32
massachusetts~usa

0 posted 1999-12-02 01:17 AM

today was weird
we did not fight
we talked and smiled and laughed away

i wasn't feared
it all felt right
he came back because he wanted to stay

i had no contact
with the other liar
i wonder why she kept silent today

but in fact
someone shyer
wrote to me in a strange odd way

the person who scribed
was her sister
trying to say everything will be okay

i'm not sure if she had been bribed
to get information
but she said her sister didn't know anyway

i told her my side
with no temptation
of being afraid to keep it away

i recieved no reply
so i'm giving up
with the liar and the one who tries to pry

but i am going to try
to work it out with the one i love
no matter what anyone says

***okay the last 2~i couldn't come up with anymore words that rhymed

~boy it's so late
that's all i've been doing since i can't fall asleep at night lately is write my stuff do you guys hoping for some replies(hey that rhymed~anyway)
all that i wrote might just changing tomorrow since nothing ever stays the same or the way i'd like it to long enough for me to enjoy it
so today i cherished everything
joe gave me hope today
and now i gave myself some hope tonight

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(:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
No matter if you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

1 posted 1999-12-02 04:26 PM

your growth as a poet in these few days is astounding, this rhyme scheme is excellent even if it did fall apart in the end there?

I do belive in forgive i dont belive in forget
those who forget the past are doomed to repeat it, or suffer when someone else does
love is blind, you are not, dont lose sight

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 1999-12-02 08:47 PM

Steph...you have a good friend in Kevin (and a very bright one) please listen to him.

Stephani
Junior Member

since 1999-11-26

Posts 32
massachusetts~usa

3 posted 1999-12-03 09:34 AM

i have an extremely good "long term memory" i remember most of the stuff that has happened to me since i was probably 8. so many traumatic things have happened to me adn i remember them<some unfortunately. trust me i will never forget what two poeple have done to me. I won't forgive my best-friend. She's had too many 2nd chacnes, but i will forgive my boyfriend SOMEDAY. i haven't yet. This is HIS ONLY 2nd chance.

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

4 posted 1999-12-03 11:43 AM

Steph...

Kevin is right. Forgive is easy..but forgetting is something you can never do...you are doing the right thing...you go girl!

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