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no sympathy for you
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no sympathy for you |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Such bull**** surrounds you this game that you play what does it amount to these things that you say Seek those sympathetic you play on emotion Dont you see how pathetic you are in your notions So say what you must Beg for your sympathy But when cleared of the dust dont come crying to me. |
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Erin123 Junior Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 13Chicago, IL |
what a strong message. i haven't been a member very long, so i haven't had a chance to read many of your works, but it seems to have a somewhat different tone than the others. still, very good. |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
i dont ushually right out of anger and bitterness but this has just got me angry, sometimes i lose faith in peoplea as a whole |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Definitely a strong message..just a reminder though, it is against forum rules to use astericks in place of innapropriate language. Thank you. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~ |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
i didnt use the asterisis, they automatically came in???? were not aloud to curse, i thought it was needed |
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Stephani Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 32massachusetts~usa |
kevin...if YOU want to talk e-mail ME i printed your poem and i hung it no my wall i just want you to know that you helped me last night  thanks------------------ (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend No matter if you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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