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Kevin
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Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 1999-12-01 12:02 PM


No one said it was easy
this wicked web we weave
So much pain, the scars remain
this heart left on my sleave.

I don't have all the answers,
Nobody really does.
Yet through my tears, I see these years
My life for what it was.

So things they came out different
Than what I dreamt of this.
And still I know, deep down below
That many things I missed.

Sometimes I feel like dying
This life I can not face.
But as I cry, I can't deny
The beauty of this place.

Somewhere people love me
I may not know it now
lonely still, this void ill fill
some way someone somehow.

Cheer up, have faith


[This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 12-01-1999).]

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Kevin
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1 posted 1999-12-01 12:09 PM


stephani without an e,i would be mad if you mispelled my name =)
Stephani
Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 32
massachusetts~usa
2 posted 1999-12-01 12:10 PM


oh my god
thank you so much
that is the sweetest thing anyone has ever done for me
i've never written poems before until 3 days ago
i'm not very good
but SOMETIMES it helps me



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"A true friend will always stay a friend
No matter if you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."



Star Fairy 2
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
3 posted 1999-12-01 12:13 PM


twaz quite beautiful
great job

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Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 1999-12-01 11:28 AM


Wonderful Kevin! This is what we are here for. To support and care for eachother. Well done.
Erin123
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 13
Chicago, IL
5 posted 1999-12-01 12:10 PM


this poem was so wonderful.
not only was it beautifully written, but i found it so touching that you would spend time writing a poem to someone you've never met, just so that they might feel better about themselves and their life. if i could phrase things in such a way, i would say the same thing.

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