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chollagrl4
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since 1999-08-10
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0 posted 1999-11-30 06:45 PM


I need you more than you need me,
easy for everyone to see.
I need you more,
than food or air.
But I cry cause you just arent there.
This need for you,
I cant control,
I gave you my heart,
I gave you my soul.
Sometimes it feels like your too far away,
but in my arms,
I need you to stay.
I love you so much,
and my tears wont subside,
dont u understand?
its killing me inside.
This need for you,
is always there.
I love you honey,
its just not fair.

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Kevin
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since 1999-11-02
Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa
1 posted 1999-11-30 07:03 PM


Love is one way emotion with a two way nessecity if that makes any sense, i know it dosent to me =) ive dabbled over this many times but if there is one thing ive learned everything happens for a reason, if you two can not be together someone better is waiting in the wings =) to dwell on it is an injustice to yourself t just brings hurt
Maitay
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since 1999-07-16
Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA
2 posted 1999-11-30 11:03 PM


kevin was completly right, I love his insight into this whole thing... wonderful poem :p

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~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~



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