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Krut Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 27Adams, Wi U.S.A |
Suddenly dreaming I'm there.. Far,far away not knowing if i should care I open my eyes only to find myself a little less wise.. Im surrounded By Beasts, Snakes, and Savages. And they all heard about my past And spoke of my tragedies unpleasingly fast. I turned around, and there the beast, Quickly cleaved into my soul, Ripping out every piece of dignity, I ever owned. And there i ceased. Leaving my heart empty and as black as coal. Then came the snakes, Stalking me as their prey. Soon, they too were on their way Hissing and striking as they whispered a blood thirsty falsehood.. That they could never begin to see.. I ran to safety. But there was no escape... They stuck to me like unbreakable sticky tape. Next came the savages... Brutally they massacred my thoughts, wishes and dreams. I couldn't help but to scream.. Awakened my my own frightening cry.. This nightmare i had, couldnt have been a lie... It cut through my mind like a sharpened knife It was uncivilized and vular. It was my life. ------------------ ~lifes a journey not a destination...~ Aerosmith |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
Krut, This is a well written poem, even though I really didn't understand it, it jumped around alot (to me it did) but I could tell you had expression in it and feeling. The only title I could think of is "Beasts, Snakes, and Savages" I don't know a poem like this deserves a great title, and it should come from you! ------------------ ©Misty For more Poems bye Misty GO TO: http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Arc/1644 "You died a failure because you never tried!" |
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