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BOO63
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since 1999-11-29
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0 posted 1999-11-29 02:36 AM


HIDING IN THE ASHES
OF LOVE THAT FELL APART
KNOWING HOW CLOSE THE PAST IS
AND TRYING TO GET OVER A BROKEN HEART

HOW DO YOU GO ON
AND TELL YOURSELF IT'S ALRIGHT
WHEN A PART OF YOU IS GONE
AND YOU CAN'T GET THROUGH THE NIGHT

WHEN YOU CAN'T LOOK IN THE MIRROR
CAUSE YOU DON'T KNOW WHO YOU ARE
YOU'RE CAUGHT IN ALL YOUR FEAR
AND YOU CAN'T GO VERY FAR

YOU REMEMBER ALL THE PAIN
AND THE LOVE THAT WENT AWAY
YOU'RE DROWNING IN THE RAIN
AND DREAMING OF A BRIGHTER DAY

© Copyright 1999 BOO63 - All Rights Reserved
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
1 posted 1999-11-29 12:19 PM


A very sad and heartfelt poem.....I can identify with the pain you're feeling now Boo63...I think almost eveyone at one time, at least, in their life, has experienced the emotions you are going through when losing someone we truly care about.
Your piece is written from the heart and written well...! Thank you for sharing...

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


Stephani
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since 1999-11-26
Posts 32
massachusetts~usa
2 posted 1999-11-29 12:25 PM


been there * done that
it happens to EVERYONE
very well written

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(:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
No matter if you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."



Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
3 posted 1999-11-29 10:15 PM


Boy, you have some talent..nice flow, wonderfully done...I can relate to this. Keep it up!

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*Krista Knutson*

"When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~


Krut
Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 27
Adams, Wi U.S.A
4 posted 1999-11-29 11:31 PM


that was really cool..ive been there too and in knew exactly the feelings u felt when u wrote this....good job

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~lifes a journey not a destination...~
Aerosmith

chollagrl4
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since 1999-08-10
Posts 65
brick
5 posted 1999-11-30 07:15 PM


very nice poem! ive felt that way many times and ive realized only time heals a broken heart. keep up the good work
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