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Krut
Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 27
Adams, Wi U.S.A

0 posted 1999-11-26 02:41 PM



Hello- how are u today?
No-wait that sounds totally gay...
How about Hey- whats up?
No-dont think so
This is crazy..
Should i say somethin or no?
But wow ure big sweet smile..
It kinda drives me wild-
I bump into you like everyday
We just stop-maybe smile-and walk weirdly away
But everyday i wanna say something....
I have no clue what...but something...
When i see you i get scared...
Scared of what?
Of you? Maybe thats a little kinda true...
I dont know...but i really gotta say...
Someting to you

© Copyright 1999 Krut - All Rights Reserved
Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 1999-11-26 04:18 PM


Welcome to Passions. I think we all have been in this situation before. Being older I have gotten over my fear of the first encounter. Thankyou for sharing with us.
Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
2 posted 1999-11-26 09:31 PM


I can definitely relate to this one...sometimes you've just got to jump in and risk it....and sometimes, it turns out right... Good job, welcome to Passions!

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*Krista Knutson*

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie beside you as you dream....." ~Faith Hill: If My Heart Had Wings~



Star Fairy 2
Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
3 posted 1999-11-26 11:21 PM


wow! this was really cute... i dont know if that'z the right word.. but i luved it!

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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