Perhaps One Day - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Teen Poetry #2

Perhaps One Day

Laura
Junior Member

since 1999-11-26

Posts 26

0 posted 1999-11-26 01:33 PM

perhaps one day i'll tell you,
of the love i have inside.
the fellings will come bursting out,
and then no more can i hide.

but what will you say? what will you do?
that is what troubles me so.
you could walk away or worse yet- do nothing at all,
and leave me feeling low.

or you could act somewhat in favor of me,
and say," i like you as a friend."
i will settle for that but it won't work that way,
and our so called "friendship" will end.

i wouldn't be able to take,
the ridicule of aiming so hi,
when i, myself, am so low.
it's time to decide- i've made up my mind,
perhaps one day i'll tell you,
but for now- You'll Never Know.

------------------
Laura

[This message has been edited by Laura (edited 11-26-1999).]

melissaramsour
Junior Member

since 1999-11-25

Posts 16
Aurora, NE

1 posted 1999-11-26 08:22 PM

Laura-
Another great peice! It's the same subject as the other, but it's written in a different style and I like this one a lot too!! I like how you project some of the outcomes that could happen, like you would in your mind. It really gives me an idea what you're thinking.
Great! Thanks for sharing!

Melissa

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.