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sweethaert14
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since 1999-11-24
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west,ca,us

0 posted 1999-11-24 06:04 PM


TRUE LOVE

Love is good and love is bad
Love is happy sometimes sad
Love is nothing, love is all
But into love, we always fall


There's puppy love and mother love
And that special love we are part of
There's love in bloom and a love affair
And all the love we have to share


Love is cruel but mostly kind
And to some, love is blind
Love is give and love is take
Love is something that we make


Love is kisses and sweet embraces
And touching all those erotic places
Love is tainted, love is pure
And love is pleasure - that's for sure


Love can break your heart in two
It can also be a dream come true
Love is neither big or small
Since love it seems can conquer all


please give me all types of comments and tips on this poem i want to know all your thoughts and fealing about it

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destiny502
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 57
OH
1 posted 1999-11-24 10:14 PM


another great poem. I liked this one the best! Thanks sweethaert14!!
April Resi
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since 1999-10-18
Posts 119
Alabama
2 posted 1999-11-25 01:18 AM


I love the way that flows and the way it makes perfect sense!!! Very nice poem...I like the rhythm!!!!
April

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...in your eyes, I see my future in an instant,
And there it goes, I think I found my best friend...

sweethaert14
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since 1999-11-24
Posts 9
west,ca,us
3 posted 1999-11-25 10:29 AM


thank you all i really do to create poetry is put my thought and feelings in verses. Any on ecan be a poet just some have a natural talent others just have to work on it. but i think that poetry is the best way to share your feelings
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