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JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 1999-11-24 04:52 PM


The reason I am here now?
Well isn't it quite clear?
It's written all over my face
And yours too, my dear.

I hated comming over here
Confrentations are not my thing
But didn't it need to be cleared up?
Before you bought the ring?

I mean, it wasn't my fault
She fell in love with you
You turned her inside out with lust
And strangled her in confinment until she turned all blue.

So the reason that I'm here is not
To tell you anything at all
But, please make the right decision
Before you make her, your one true love, take a giant fall.

© Copyright 1999 Kristen Joy Jacobus - All Rights Reserved
Midnight
Junior Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 28

1 posted 1999-11-25 12:49 PM


I hope everthing turns out good, joy...this is a really good poem.

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JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
2 posted 1999-11-29 06:54 PM


Thanks Midnight.
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