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Erin123
Junior Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 13
Chicago, IL

0 posted 1999-11-23 08:18 PM


She holds your hand as you walk in the dark
She holds your hand as you travel through light
She embraces not just your body, but your heart
The only tears she brings are that of happiness
The words "I promise" need not be spoken
It is a given that they apply
Only she can flash that crazy grin
Only she can make you bring out your own
When the world turns it's back,
You have her to hold you up
Love me not with your words, I say
Love me not with your gestures
But allow me in, and love me there

© Copyright 1999 Erin123 - All Rights Reserved
Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 1999-11-23 09:11 PM


Welcome to Passions. This is a very touching piece.

I would like to point out that this is an interactive board and your replies to others work are appreciated.

Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
2 posted 1999-11-23 10:15 PM


Very beautiful work, welcome to Passions.

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*Krista Knutson*

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie beside you as you dream....." ~Faith Hill: If My Heart Had Wings~



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