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Teen Poetry #2

what do you think?

lace
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 4
maryland

0 posted 1999-11-22 10:17 PM

mystical beams that flout across the streams
though it seems that he means for me too live my dreams
im drowning in my silent screams

Shorty Du Opp
Junior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 11
West Allis, WI, USA

1 posted 1999-11-27 02:10 AM

I think is a great start to what could be a great poem.

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 1999-11-27 10:27 PM

I love it! You definitely have a way with words. Keep it up!

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*Krista Knutson*

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie beside you as you dream....." ~Faith Hill: If My Heart Had Wings~

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