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Lyndz Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 31 |
A place that I know very well Is a place you'll find me often It's a place away from everyone else But it's not a place forgotten A place inside where music wafts On a fresh an airy breeze An open place where my heart can feel Whatever it might please This place is by a waterfall Where wildlife comes and goes A place where it is never cold But somehow it often snows I've sought this place quite often Especially as a child A place where I am free to roam And let my thoughts run wild The water softly flowing Is like a music box Around it is a mossy path Used for relaxing walks The water in the pond Is always cool and clear I am the only human No one else is even near |
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Lilli Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 21Melbourne, Australia |
This was fantastic, so heartfelt and descriptive, keep it up. (not that I'd know anything of course)  ------------------ There's a pretty girl on the face of the magazine What I see is my dirty hands turning the page |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very lovely, I enjoy your style. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie beside you as you dream....." ~Faith Hill: If My Heart Had Wings~ |
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