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Angela Durham
Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 10
Az

0 posted 1999-11-22 12:06 PM


Lover lay me down to sleep,
I pray to,
My soul to keep,
If should die before I wake,
I give to you my soul to take.
Stay with me while I Sleep,
Pray with me when I am weak.

Lover lay me down to sleep,
Promise me your soul to keep.
If you should die before you wake,
I will take with me your heart to keep.
I shall stay with you when you are weak,
I will watch you when you sleep.

Lover lay me down to sleep,
Lover come lay down next to me.
Together we will be, Together we will dream,
Together here you and me.

Lover Come Be With Me

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Angela Durham

© Copyright 1999 Angela Durham - All Rights Reserved
crazy
Junior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 20
catawissa, pa, usa
1 posted 1999-11-22 01:42 PM


cute poem, good job!
April Resi
Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119
Alabama
2 posted 1999-11-22 06:31 PM


very nice poem! Not so much cute, but veery sweet!!!!I like it!
April

Lyndz
Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 31

3 posted 1999-11-22 06:41 PM


Very romantic. I liked it.
foxy_16
Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 31
Lake Lillian, MN, USA
4 posted 1999-11-22 07:22 PM


i love this poem! it touched me in the heart. it is written so beautifully! keep writing this sort of work! Good Luck!


~Kayla~

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