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foxy_16
Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 31
Lake Lillian, MN, USA

0 posted 1999-11-21 05:47 PM



It creeps up out of the allies of loneliness
To pick you up off your feet
And carry you away
Off to the castles of pure happiness

It saves you from the fists of anger
By sweet whispers of thoughtful words
That in unexplainable ways
Make you forget everything

It brings you out of the darkness & shadows of sadness
And into a light brighter than the brightest star
Where laughter and joy
Bloom like wildflowers in the Garden of Eden

It takes away
Your worries
Your pains
Your despair

And leaves you searching no longer for anything…....
But your breath.



© Copyright 1999 foxy_16 - All Rights Reserved
Star Fairy 2
Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
1 posted 1999-11-21 06:21 PM


WoW
this was beautiful
great job!

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 1999-11-21 10:17 PM


Excellent. This piece was wonderfully written.
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