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Night
New Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 4
New Jersey

0 posted 1999-11-21 11:59 AM


Some things in life
Can never be the same
Others will simply
Never exist to be
Press rewind and watch
As i went astray
To be left behind
Trampled and pushed about
Play me by emotions
Raise and lower the strings
Holding me hostage
Will i choose life
Will i choose death
Misery filled with happiness
Smiles tainted with pain
My road is long
But still i remain
Dreaming endless dreams
Of what may become
Of what may be
Glancing aside to see
If you're there with me.

© Copyright 1999 Night - All Rights Reserved
Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 1999-11-21 12:58 PM


Welcome to Passions. This is a wonderful poem of the struggles of life. I will be lookinf forward to reading more of you here.
Star Fairy 2
Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
2 posted 1999-11-21 01:09 PM


Wow!
this was very good
you put a lot of feelings into those words
very expressive
keep up the good work


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