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The Mike Sacks
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since 1999-08-29
Posts 129
brooklyn ny

0 posted 1999-11-21 12:45 PM


Did u ever get sick wen u look in a mirror?
well i do!
i get so sick i feel like taking all those pills
behind that mirror in the medicine cabinete.
well i do!

Did you ever get so atracted to someone
that wen u see them and remember u cant ahve them
u wanna cry ur self to death,
Well i do!
Well i do!!

did u ever here your voice then decide
that u'd like to swallow rubbing alcohol?
well i have!
Wat?,i have!!

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Lilli
Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 21
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 1999-11-21 03:51 AM


OOOOH, you just hit the spot with that one! It was interesting, I've never even thought to write those kind of feelings down, I don't want them to feel so permanent! It was a creative way of writing it down, well done Mike!

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There's a pretty girl on the face of the magazine
What I see is my dirty hands turning the page

The Mike Sacks
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since 1999-08-29
Posts 129
brooklyn ny
2 posted 1999-12-01 10:51 PM


hey
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