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Teen Poetry #2

My Life (please respond)

chollagrl4
Member

since 1999-08-10

Posts 65
brick

0 posted 1999-11-20 10:23 PM

I am the only one to shed these tears,
I am the only one to calm my fears.
You, the creator, of my heaven and hell,
have caused me to think back,
to ponder,
to dwell.
Dwell on those times,
where my happiness came like rain.
Now the thunderclouds remain over my head,
making me go insane.
Cut into my heart,
like the blade of a knife,
is you,
you, the center of my life.
Do not turn away,
why cant u see?
the sadness in my eyes,
all my misery.
I know you can see,
straight into my soul,
You've chosen not to care,
it's my heart you stole.
My anger is unseen to you,
yet so plain for me to see.
I think,
I feel,
I try to express,
but it always comes back to me.
One day you will feel,
the pain of my empty heart,
and love me for enduring it.
And I will hate you for creating it.

Carrie
Junior Member

since 1999-11-18

Posts 11
lithia springs,GA,USA

1 posted 1999-11-20 10:30 PM

Wow that is strong. but God doesn't mean to bring you pain. If he does he does it out of love. That you might learn from the things that are around you. But as I had to learn the hard way. The devil has many disguises and he can pretend he is your God but it is your decisions that get you where you are. God only tries to help you though them and if you allow him he can help you make the right decisions. Just don't give up hope.
Love Carrie

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