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Teen Poetry #2

I Knew You Well

Erynn Griffin
Junior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 27
San Angelo, TX United States

0 posted 1999-11-20 08:02 PM

I knew your dreams
Because we used to talk
For hours at a time

I knew your Friendship
Because you were always there
When I needed your comfort

I knew your pain
Because you trusted me enough
To share your past with me

I knew your fears
Because you helped me
To see that mine were the same

I knew what was important to you
Because you were always
So honest with me

I knew your goals
Because I felt enthusiasm
In your words when you talked of them

I knew your guidance
Because you patiently explained
The things I didn't understand

I knew your heart
Because I saw right into it
And felt it as part of my own

Written
11/5
For Cory Estes

Lyndz
Junior Member

since 1999-11-19

Posts 31

1 posted 1999-11-22 07:03 PM

I like it. It seemed to flow vey well for me, and it expresses such deep emotions.

Nice, Very nice.

Lyndz

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"Peace and Love, tears of joy, kindness of strangers. All of your roads paved in gold by Guardian Angels."
~~Blessid Union of Souls~~

Carrie
Junior Member

since 1999-11-18

Posts 11
lithia springs,GA,USA

2 posted 1999-11-22 09:40 PM

Oh,I love this poem. I think you did an excellent job. That is so cool! I understand the whole thing and it fits my situation so well. You did a wonderful job. If only words can say. Keep up the GOOD work!
Carrie

foxy_16
Junior Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 31
Lake Lillian, MN, USA

3 posted 1999-11-22 10:03 PM

This is such a great poem! I love its style and the way it flows and the meaning it holds. You are very talented. Keep it up!

~Kayla~

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