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Teen Poetry #2

I Miss You

x96kxrkgrl
Junior Member

since 1999-11-18

Posts 11
Marion, Ohio, US

0 posted 1999-11-19 08:28 PM

You work hard,
I miss you.
You go out with friends,
I miss you.
You help around the house,
I miss you.

I cant get you out of my head,
I think about you from,
When I wake up,
Till I go to bed.
It doesnt end there,
For you are in my dreams aswell.

Morning, noon, night,
Your always there.
And if Im not thinking about you,
Youll always know that I love you.
My heart beats for the time,
the time we talk again.

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~Melissa~

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-11-20 12:08 PM

This poem is very sweet, and well done.

Might I suggest, mellisa, that you also make an effort to reply to other people's work here at Passions? I don't know if I've mentioned this to you before, but replies are greatly appreciated. Thanks.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

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