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4th of July |
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x96kxrkgrl Junior Member
since 1999-11-18
Posts 11Marion, Ohio, US |
This is the first time I was ever told by a boyfriend, that he loved me... You tell me you have something special, Something you want me to see. You take my hand, Leading the way. We get in the car, And drive that hot summer day. We drive the hour to the beach, Home of the cool crystal water. You set me on the blanket, As the sun sets in the sky. You put your arm around me, Letting me feel your love. As I lean to kiss you, The sky lights up. Fireworks explode, You tell me sweetly. "You are more beautiful, Than the sky, even at this moment. My eyes fill up, And I start to cry. Just then, You look me in the eyes, You kiss my cheek Where my tears run free, And tell me, that you LOVE me. ------------------ ~Melissa~ |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
That is sooooo sweet. My boyfriend first told me he loved me when I was crying over the phone to him, because I was staying at my dad's and thought I'd never see him again after the school year was up, and he just blurted out that he loved me......it was so sweet....and this was months before we started dating! ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Angela16 Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 37USA |
I think this is a really good poem, you seem to have a lot of talent in writing! nice work! ------------------ Angela |
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