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Angela16
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since 1999-11-19
Posts 37
USA

0 posted 1999-11-19 04:25 PM


I say I don't care, but it's not true
cuz I'll never really be over you.
It's you that I adore,
I crave to know you more.
I was so infatuadted with you
But then it was lost in one quick blink of an eye.
Are you ever coming back,
or was it a good-bye?




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Angela

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x96kxrkgrl
Junior Member
since 1999-11-18
Posts 11
Marion, Ohio, US
1 posted 1999-11-19 05:35 PM


Your poem was great! I know how you feel. I lost someone that I loved over something stupid once too. It took awhile before it set in that they were actually gone.

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~Melissa~

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