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Darcy Elizabeth Houghton
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since 1999-11-18
Posts 2
Oregon

0 posted 1999-11-18 05:31 PM


You say your a friend?
you say trust is impotant to you
but do you ever trust?
A true friend is one who cares,
and one who is always there,
you care but when a guy comes along
your never there for me anymore.
Backstabbers only accuse everyone around them, for they are just the victims in there own eyes.
But who are you?

© Copyright 1999 Darcy Elizabeth Houghton - All Rights Reserved
Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 1999-11-18 07:19 PM


What you say here is very true. We all must look inside of ourselves for the answer.
Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
2 posted 1999-11-19 08:05 PM


I agree with most of the ideas in this one, except for the implication that good friends must trust......I don't trust anyone fully, but I can be fully trusted. My lack of trust is from a combination of my personality and circumstances I have lived with. Does that make me a bad friend?

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



Angela16
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since 1999-11-19
Posts 37
USA
3 posted 1999-11-19 08:16 PM


I can see where you are coming from,
good work

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Angela

Litzie
Junior Member
since 1999-11-14
Posts 12

4 posted 1999-11-20 08:03 PM


I agree with what you said, I dont understand girls who think of friendship as a way to fill the time between boyfriends...nice job on the poem

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life is like a box of chocholates...it all tastes so good!

Erynn Griffin
Junior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 27
San Angelo, TX United States
5 posted 1999-11-20 08:07 PM


great work keep it up
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