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Trinity New Member
since 1999-11-18
Posts 6rockford,il,usa |
october embers have drifted to my door... i gather the in a sphere of sighs- vanilla and loose. they strech as a curtain laced in the breezy caresses upon my balcony window. softly entangled in webs of mist they nod and still they have spread like a smile, these october embers to my door. i have never known such surrender before. waves invisible, insecure and unopposible have blown in circles; they thoughtfully shoot in arcs. so fickle and beautiful, all these october embers that have sought my shore. i have sense wisdom in liberty. perfect and bruised, authentic and natural, they pilot the petals of whispered love. they are windswept: unassuming, even modest, like the liquid locks of children who play with the dusk and drink it like honey. kindly they dont think; they just come like wings sweet of rememberence. silently they drift, these october embers, these flakes of love, understanding, and death to my door.... i hold them forever more. ------------------ the best thing about life is.....knowing you put it together ~Trent Reznor |
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Litzie Junior Member
since 1999-11-14
Posts 12 |
wow! this was great. I really loved the way you phrased stuff. It left me with a nice warm feeling in my stomach. Great job! ------------------ life is like a box of chocholates...it all tastes so good! |
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