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Teen Poetry #2

In Time You'll Know

crazy
Junior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 20
catawissa, pa, usa

0 posted 1999-11-17 04:56 PM

You don't know
how I feel about you
I could write it in the snow
or just say it out of the blue

You still wouldn't know
how i feel about you
Because you're too far away
and never close enough to know

I'm sure if you would get closer
you would find out
but you're very busy
and have no time to meet me

Whenever you get time
I hope you'll come
because you know
The love that lasts longest
is love that isn't returned

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Heather Thomas

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-11-17 10:16 PM

I like the poem- however, must disagree with the last lines....love that lasts without love in return becomes obsession.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

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