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When The Morning Comes
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When The Morning Comes |
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crazy Junior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 20catawissa, pa, usa |
When the morning comes I'll be better But I'll still remember What I've done The pain I caused you Was truely accidental I wish I could of told you I wish you could of listened But you didn't And I didn't speak Now we're apart There's a gap between us I'd like to mend You don't care But I wish you would Yes, I know now I have to let go It won't be easy I have to be strong Please remember me Remember all the great time we had I'll miss you Oh, by the way I love you ------------------ Heather Thomas |
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crazy Junior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 20catawissa, pa, usa |
This poem is about losing someone, through something you've done, but didn't mean. And you've caused them so much pain, they don't care anymore. So you have no other choice then to move on, and it's hard. And after that person leaves it's too late to tell them how you felt. Crazy |
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Peter Hang New Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 7Alma MI, USA |
this was a great poem. I could really relate. when things happen that you have no control over, it really sucks. great job!!! |
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