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lace New Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 4maryland |
did you know that god apove picked you out for me to love,placed you out above the rest cuz he knew id love you best if i die befor you do ill go to heaven and wait for you,and for each day that your not there ill place your name on a golden stair if your not there by judgment day ill know you went the other way,so ill pack my bags and all my things and give the angels back their wings,and and just to prove my love is true ill go to hell to be with you |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Lace. You have some rhyming lines in this but it is not presented like poetry. This presentation is more like a prose piece. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Personally, though it isn't presented in poem form...I love this...the idea is so simple, yet beautiful in its nature..... Welcome to Passions, Lace ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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