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Teen Poetry #2

One Special Kiss

ILoveSrfrs
Member

since 1999-11-14

Posts 69
California

0 posted 1999-11-14 05:22 PM

What I want out of all of this
Is just that one special moment
That one special kiss
To feel your lips brush against mine
And know for just one minute
That everything is fine
That everything will be ok
until that moment when
one of us will pull away
Just for a second-
I don't care if we miss
Just that one special moment
That one special kiss

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-11-14 08:01 PM

I don't understand the 3rd to last line...."I don't care if we miss"

What don't you care if you miss?

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

ILoveSrfrs
Member

since 1999-11-14

Posts 69
California

2 posted 1999-11-14 11:12 PM

I really don't know what I was trying to say. It was just something I wrote on impulse-sorry! Ilovesrfrs

lostprincess
New Member

since 1999-11-14

Posts 6
dalton ma us

3 posted 1999-11-14 11:46 PM

i understand what you were sayin i felt the same way. there will always be those moments when you loss yourself in emotion.

SweetStuff27
Junior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 10
LA, California, USA

4 posted 1999-11-15 09:11 PM

This is a sweet poem that get's you right in the heart. It sound as though a "love-sick" little girl just wants a special moment to remember.

SweetStuff27
Junior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 10
LA, California, USA

5 posted 1999-11-15 09:12 PM

This is a sweet poem that get's you right in the heart. It sound as though a "love-sick" little girl just wants a special moment to remember.

SweetStuff27
Junior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 10
LA, California, USA

6 posted 1999-11-15 09:12 PM

This is a sweet poem that get's you right in the heart. It sound as though a "love-sick" little girl just wants a special moment to remember.

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